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求帮忙修改英文转系申请,主要是措辞和语法,若是有对于行文思路的建议就更好了,

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求帮忙修改英文转系申请,主要是措辞和语法,若是有对于行文思路的建议就更好了,
Good writing. Some minor suggestions follow, but think before you leap!
I am submitting this application letter for transferring from Business Department to Anthropology Department.
The one-academic-year study in Business Administration (BA) was meaningful. I learned professional basic knowledge and become more outgoing. However, I have less interest in business and it’s hard for me to keep up my motivation. ….and full of passion in studying related courses.
Ethnography, a branch of Anthropology, draws my attention.
The best major is not the very hot one,...
Attached please find the relevant material for the application of Department transfer.