各位英语能手们!帮忙看看我的作文哪里错了改过来,
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各位英语能手们!帮忙看看我的作文哪里错了改过来,
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It was windy on my winter holiday (ON)
the Spring Festival (the)
I like to sleep on my holiday because it felt nice.(去掉句号)
I like my winter holiday very much.(这样说)
I like my winter holidy very much because my family and I was all together on the Spring Festival Eve.(还是去掉句号,变换句序)
We can watch TV,eat dinner,and so on.(不要用.)
We were happy.(时态)
再问: 为什不能用省略号
再答: 老外很少用...
再问: 那算错吗
再答: 不算错,不过一般是3个点 ... 但是最好用 etc 或 and so on 代替,这样比较常见
the Spring Festival (the)
I like to sleep on my holiday because it felt nice.(去掉句号)
I like my winter holiday very much.(这样说)
I like my winter holidy very much because my family and I was all together on the Spring Festival Eve.(还是去掉句号,变换句序)
We can watch TV,eat dinner,and so on.(不要用.)
We were happy.(时态)
再问: 为什不能用省略号
再答: 老外很少用...
再问: 那算错吗
再答: 不算错,不过一般是3个点 ... 但是最好用 etc 或 and so on 代替,这样比较常见
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