作业帮一小段英文,请指正错误.
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一小段英文,请指正错误.
We should widen our professional computer lab immediately.Since our school become to a real university,the quantity of UFV’s students are becoming bigger and bigger.Therefore,more and more CIS students need to use computer to do their labs or programs at campus.However,we now have a very small professional lab which can only allow eight people do labs in the same time.Some students even have to reserve a space before two weeks of the lab time.I see lots of CIS students complain about this status on their MSN space.Now,it’s time to widen or rebuild a bigger computer lab.Anyway,this action will attract new students join this program and government may imburse campus for doing this befitting conduct.
We should widen our professional computer lab immediately.Since our school become to a real university,the quantity of UFV’s students are becoming bigger and bigger.Therefore,more and more CIS students need to use computer to do their labs or programs at campus.However,we now have a very small professional lab which can only allow eight people do labs in the same time.Some students even have to reserve a space before two weeks of the lab time.I see lots of CIS students complain about this status on their MSN space.Now,it’s time to widen or rebuild a bigger computer lab.Anyway,this action will attract new students join this program and government may imburse campus for doing this befitting conduct.
1、become应该用became,因为成为一所real university是已经发生了的事,
2、the quantity of UFV’s students are becoming bigger and bigger这句话显然是中文思维的产物,呵呵,最好改为如：the annual enrolment of students is on the rise,
3、more and more CIS students need to use computer to do their labs or programs at campus此句中的CIS不知是什么意思,labs是指实验室,而非试验,另外这句话所要传达的最主要的意思是电脑越来越紧缺,而并非学生需要做实验,故不如改为more and more computers are needed for new students to do experiments or programs
4、in the same time中的介词使用不当,应改为at the same time,整句稍改一下会好一些,建议你改为：we now only have a very small professional lab which merely allows eight people do experiments at the same time.
5、Some students even have to reserve a space before two weeks of the lab time改为 Some students even have to make a reservation 2 weeks ahead of the experiment time .
6、I see lots of CIS students complain about this status on their MSN space改为I can see lots of CIS students complain about their MSN status,
7、this action will attract new students join this program and government may imburse campus for doing this befitting conduct.改为this practice will attract more new students to join in the program and the government may come to our imbursement.注意词组attract sb to do sth和join in +某项活动
2、the quantity of UFV’s students are becoming bigger and bigger这句话显然是中文思维的产物,呵呵,最好改为如：the annual enrolment of students is on the rise,
3、more and more CIS students need to use computer to do their labs or programs at campus此句中的CIS不知是什么意思,labs是指实验室,而非试验,另外这句话所要传达的最主要的意思是电脑越来越紧缺,而并非学生需要做实验,故不如改为more and more computers are needed for new students to do experiments or programs
4、in the same time中的介词使用不当,应改为at the same time,整句稍改一下会好一些,建议你改为：we now only have a very small professional lab which merely allows eight people do experiments at the same time.
5、Some students even have to reserve a space before two weeks of the lab time改为 Some students even have to make a reservation 2 weeks ahead of the experiment time .
6、I see lots of CIS students complain about this status on their MSN space改为I can see lots of CIS students complain about their MSN status,
7、this action will attract new students join this program and government may imburse campus for doing this befitting conduct.改为this practice will attract more new students to join in the program and the government may come to our imbursement.注意词组attract sb to do sth和join in +某项活动