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这句英文有没有语病 有没有更好的写法

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这句英文有没有语病 有没有更好的写法
Happened by which the sales of goods,products and supplying services,the funds which will be collected from ordering entities and service-accepting entities will be booked according to the actual amount.
happen by?很别扭,但没找出具体错误,我用我自己的写法试着改写一下.
The sales of goods,products and supplying services will be booked according to the actual amount by the funds would have been collected from ordering and service-accepting entities.
你看看是不是感觉要好一点.