请高手们帮我看看自荐信有哪些错误并纠正
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请高手们帮我看看自荐信有哪些错误并纠正
Dear manager:
Thank you for taking your time to read my resume.I am a 2009 graduate major in International Economic and trade of ShangRao Normal College.According to my knowledge of your company's career and business,and consideration of my profession,I think your company is my ideal choice.Therefore,I wrote this letter,with the sincerely hope of becoming a member of your company,so I may help the development of your company,and get a self-development chance for myself.
I realized these during my university time:the modern competitive society needs to have compound talents.That is why I usually pay attention to build my own ability in my usual studying life.In the aspect of professional knowledge,I attach great importance to the study of professional courses,basic course,seriously doing every class's exercises,social practice,and so on.I grasp on financial professional knowledge very well.At the same time,I did not satisfy; so I had learn all kinds of computer software,network application technology,securities-related knowledge by myself,in order to improve my own skills.
In life,I put 100% enthusiasm and efforts to every work,and I got the teachers and students' affirmation,grew up in rural areas,so I learned to self-reliance since I was young,life experience makes me have a hard-working spirit.I have the courage to face my own inadequacies,to challenge frustration of life.If I am honored to be employed by your company,I will do everything to familiar with the company's internal environment and works,knowing your business,understanding yours culture in a short time,and get into the big family as soon as I can,Contribute my wisdom and energetic,help the development of your company.
Finally,I wish your career to flourish!
Sincerely
Salute
Dear manager:
Thank you for taking your time to read my resume.I am a 2009 graduate major in International Economic and trade of ShangRao Normal College.According to my knowledge of your company's career and business,and consideration of my profession,I think your company is my ideal choice.Therefore,I wrote this letter,with the sincerely hope of becoming a member of your company,so I may help the development of your company,and get a self-development chance for myself.
I realized these during my university time:the modern competitive society needs to have compound talents.That is why I usually pay attention to build my own ability in my usual studying life.In the aspect of professional knowledge,I attach great importance to the study of professional courses,basic course,seriously doing every class's exercises,social practice,and so on.I grasp on financial professional knowledge very well.At the same time,I did not satisfy; so I had learn all kinds of computer software,network application technology,securities-related knowledge by myself,in order to improve my own skills.
In life,I put 100% enthusiasm and efforts to every work,and I got the teachers and students' affirmation,grew up in rural areas,so I learned to self-reliance since I was young,life experience makes me have a hard-working spirit.I have the courage to face my own inadequacies,to challenge frustration of life.If I am honored to be employed by your company,I will do everything to familiar with the company's internal environment and works,knowing your business,understanding yours culture in a short time,and get into the big family as soon as I can,Contribute my wisdom and energetic,help the development of your company.
Finally,I wish your career to flourish!
Sincerely
Salute
Dear manager:
Thank you for taking your time to read my resume. I am a 2009 graduate major in International Economic and trade of Shangri Normal College. According to my knowledge of your company's career and business, and consideration of my profession, I think your company is my ideal choice. Therefore, I wrote this letter, with the sincerely hope of becoming a member of your company, so I may help the development of your company, and get a self-development chance for myself.
I realized these during my university time: the modern competitive society needs to have compound talents. That is why I usually pay attention to build my own ability in my usual studying life. In the aspect of professional knowledge, I attach great importance to the study of professional courses, basic course, seriously doing every class's exercises, social practice, and so on. I grasp on financial professional knowledge very well. At the same time, I did not satisfy; so I had learn all kinds of computer software, network application technology, securities-related knowledge by myself, in order to improve my own skills.
In life, I put 100% enthusiasm and efforts to every work, and I got the teachers and students' affirmation, grew up in rural areas, so I learned to self-reliance since I was young, life experience makes me have a hard-working spirit. I have the courage to face my own inadequacies, to challenge frustration of life. If I am honored to be employed by your company, I will do everything to familiar with the company's internal environment and works, knowing your business, understanding yours culture in a short time, and get into the big family as soon as I can, Contribute my wisdom and energetic, help the development of your company.
Finally, I wish your career to flourish!
Sincerely
Salute
自己看
Thank you for taking your time to read my resume. I am a 2009 graduate major in International Economic and trade of Shangri Normal College. According to my knowledge of your company's career and business, and consideration of my profession, I think your company is my ideal choice. Therefore, I wrote this letter, with the sincerely hope of becoming a member of your company, so I may help the development of your company, and get a self-development chance for myself.
I realized these during my university time: the modern competitive society needs to have compound talents. That is why I usually pay attention to build my own ability in my usual studying life. In the aspect of professional knowledge, I attach great importance to the study of professional courses, basic course, seriously doing every class's exercises, social practice, and so on. I grasp on financial professional knowledge very well. At the same time, I did not satisfy; so I had learn all kinds of computer software, network application technology, securities-related knowledge by myself, in order to improve my own skills.
In life, I put 100% enthusiasm and efforts to every work, and I got the teachers and students' affirmation, grew up in rural areas, so I learned to self-reliance since I was young, life experience makes me have a hard-working spirit. I have the courage to face my own inadequacies, to challenge frustration of life. If I am honored to be employed by your company, I will do everything to familiar with the company's internal environment and works, knowing your business, understanding yours culture in a short time, and get into the big family as soon as I can, Contribute my wisdom and energetic, help the development of your company.
Finally, I wish your career to flourish!
Sincerely
Salute
自己看