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Correct the mistakes
This is the exposition of a comb. Maybe there are some wrong sentences in the article.(It means probably the article is correct absolutely.)Correct it if the sentence is wrong.
TEXT:
Our combs and fine toothed bamboo combs are made of boxwood,nanmu or bamboo with excellent crafts.It has been proved by modern medicine that often combing one's hair with this kind of combs can ease one's headache and sleeplessness and can refresh one's mind,combing one's hair with this kind of combs can also make one hear and see well.
...... Correct!Understand?
Not translate!
基本没错吧.就是细节方面
crafts变成craftsmanship是不是好点?
nanmu or bamboo =nanmu and bamboo
often combing one's hair with this kind of combs can ease one's headache and sleeplessness = combing one's hair regularly with this kind of combs can help heal headache and insomnia.