作业帮英语达人给我改下作文,如果能有讲解就更好了
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英语达人给我改下作文,如果能有讲解就更好了
liveing alone or liveing with roommate
As a college student ,we should living with roommate ,Actually,we have two ways to chose ,living alone or living with roommate .
So ,some students prefer to living alone,while others feel that there are more advantage to living with roommate.
For college students ,living alone is a special way,because they can't commiunication with other ,people will feeling longly.In addition,dormitory rooms are small and crowded.This lack of space can limit one's privacy and make it difficult for students to concentrate on their studies.
In my opinion,the adventages of liveing with roommate outweigh the disadventages,living withroommate also trains students' communication ability as they need to spend more time to cooperate with their roommates .moreover,dormitory is a small society,SO,as a college students,living with roommate is necessary.
liveing alone or liveing with roommate
As a college student ,we should living with roommate ,Actually,we have two ways to chose ,living alone or living with roommate .
So ,some students prefer to living alone,while others feel that there are more advantage to living with roommate.
For college students ,living alone is a special way,because they can't commiunication with other ,people will feeling longly.In addition,dormitory rooms are small and crowded.This lack of space can limit one's privacy and make it difficult for students to concentrate on their studies.
In my opinion,the adventages of liveing with roommate outweigh the disadventages,living withroommate also trains students' communication ability as they need to spend more time to cooperate with their roommates .moreover,dormitory is a small society,SO,as a college students,living with roommate is necessary.
首先整体没什么大的毛病,但作为大学生你用词是不是有点简单了,你那句狭小的空间限制了自由并且不能专心学习改成：Crowded space restrictions of the freedom of the individual and makes it hard to concentrate learning是不是更好一点,简单明了反正总体真是挺好的
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