请帮忙修正我英语日记中的错误 ,非常感谢

请帮忙修正我英语日记中的错误 ,非常感谢
Dear ：
For improving a writing skill , i will to write a composition in every week.
If you feel free.Please help me to check the Composition .
Thanks for your help .
Best Regards.
Nov 23.2006 thursday light rain
Yesterday evering I have supper in a restauant which i often stayed in .The boss is from GuiZhou Province .he is a young man with a excellent aspect . when i came in his sight ,he smiled and asked me :"What do you want ? the beef is very fresh. I just choosed it in food market ". i said : "OK" . wait for a moment . he have cooked it and take it to my table and said: please enjoying .if you have any questions. please let me know .i will improved it . i said :" thank you .but it delicious".
this evering . i came in this restauant for supper again . he asked me ："the beef is really delicious? but your face is give away your heart .it's badly ,isn't it ? hehe". i smiled. he sayid:"yes,in fact ,your cooking skills is still need study. hehe", he said :yesterday I cooking food with a sorrow mood . when i have a good mood,my cooking is able to get better ".then i asked he a question ："Perhaps I go to your restaurant to have a meal ex- first essentials to ask whether you have a good mood or not ". his face was flushing and give me a unnatral smile. afterwards, he said :No, if you enjoy here . i will cooking more delicious foods&my mood will get better. ：)

Yesterday evering I have supper in a restauant which i often stayed in .The boss is from GuiZhou Province .he is a young man with an excellent character.Everytime when he saw me,he will smile and asked," May I help you?The beef just came in from the market,it's very fresh.Would you like some?" I replied," Sure." After a while,he finished cooking the beef and serve it personally to me."Please approach me for feedbacks.I will be glad to improve on my cooking." I smiled back and said with beef in my mouth," It's perfect!" This evening,I came into this restaurant for dinner again.He asked ," Does the beef really taste good?Your face don't match with your mouth.It taste terrible,right?" I smiled," Actually your cooking skills still need some improvements." He said," Yesterday,I felt sorrow while I cooked.But most of the time,when I am happy,my food will taste better.So I replied," So when I went into your restaurant to have a meal,I must asked whether are you having a good mood or bad mood?" His face blushed and smile sheepishly.After a while,he said," Of course not,if you like to eat here,I will definitely cook more delicious food and my mood will be better."
死小鬼...我看你这样的英文你考试会死得多掺