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改错1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;   2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.  I learned ea

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改错
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
  I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,"That's it.No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little(LESS) aggressive. From the time I was about four until(TO) I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy(TOYS). I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did(WENT) wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which(WHAT) was happening. When I tear(TORE) apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to(FOR) you." My punishment lasted (FOR)a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must (COULD)make my toys to(去掉to) last My attitude changed from then on
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