请帮忙改改英语作文,另外,此作文要求100字左右,我实际写了80多个字,（不含标点和空格）,李明写信给李华诉说他不善交际

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请帮忙改改英语作文,
另外,此作文要求100字左右,我实际写了80多个字,（不含标点和空格）,
李明写信给李华诉说他不善交际的烦恼.请你（李华）根据以下提示给李明回信,提出建议：
1.友善、乐于助人；2.多与人交流；3多参加活动；……
I learned that you can't get on well with others and make friends with your classmates.There are some advices for you.
The best way to let others be fond of you is a warm heart helping them when they are in trouble and always keeping friendly will make people like you.Takei8ng part in more activities is also a good way communicating with others can help people understand you better.
In a word,if you are friendly,you will make more friends.
Best wishes
Yours Li Hua

some advice(s) advice不可数
is keeping a warm heart to help them when they are in trouble(之前的句子有点别扭,现在改为:一颗热心肠的心去帮助那些有麻烦的人.) and if you always keep friendly(我用IF来引导这句话)it will make people like you.
a good way to communicate with others (这句话已经结束了.) It can help people understand you better.
祝学业进步,有任何问题可以直接M我.

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