如何写evaluation啊.我看了一篇有关美国人写支持去火星探索的文章,我想反驳他.无奈不知道格式如

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如何写evaluation啊.我看了一篇有关美国人写支持去火星探索的文章,我想反驳他.无奈不知道格式如
The author Joulwan Melissa deems it’s essential for US to send a manned mission to Mars,Exploring to Mars is not only good for understanding our plan,but also gaining national pride.More importantly,by doing this plan,it will regain the top position in science and technology.However,I do not agree with author.The government should more concern about people,because the mission would waste too much and hurt other welfare plans.In addition,there is no need to urgently explore it at this moment,because Mars will still be there.It is unrealistic idea for going to mars at this moment.
这是我的文章.可以帮我改改吗?
我全部钱了。我真不知道怎么写evluation,...老师说不可以加自己太多的观点..但是评价不都是自己观点加例子吗？真奇怪

The author Joulwan Melissa deems it’s essential for US to send a manned mission to Mars,Exploring to Mars is not only good for understanding our plan,but also gaining national pride.More importantly,by doing this plan,it will regain the top position in science and technology.However,I do not agree with author.The government should more concern about people,because the mission would waste too much and hurt other welfare plans.In addition,there is no need to urgently explore it at this moment,because Mars will still be there.It is unrealistic idea for going to mars at this moment.
这就够了我写的也差不多这样

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