作业帮这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改
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这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改
Private Cars
Nowadays many people preper private cars because it has a significant role in our daliy life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First,the private cars can make it more convenient for people to work and and travel and make them enjoy their life better.Besides,the private cars have improved the quality of life and work efficiency.
But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that causing the traffic jams,To make matter worse,the increase of private cars have caused the environmental pollution.
Through the above analysis,I believe that positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.I would like to the people have private cars.
Private Cars
Nowadays many people preper private cars because it has a significant role in our daliy life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First,the private cars can make it more convenient for people to work and and travel and make them enjoy their life better.Besides,the private cars have improved the quality of life and work efficiency.
But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that causing the traffic jams,To make matter worse,the increase of private cars have caused the environmental pollution.
Through the above analysis,I believe that positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.I would like to the people have private cars.
has-----------plays 较好
Generally-------Generally speaking 较好
改：
efficiency------efficiently ,work 这是动词,后面要用副词修饰,当然,为了对称,也可以改为：
the efficiency of work
to make matter worse----- to make the matter worse
have------has ,the increase of：增加……的危险,表示……的危险的时候,谓语动词用单数形式
I would like to the people have private cars.-----------I would like the people to have private cars.
would like=want ,适合 want sb to do sth,即是would like sb to do sth
再问： to make matter worse我打错了，是matters，这句话是模板里的一句话。最后一段我还需要再补充些别的吗？总感觉很不充实
再答： to make matters worse 可以 个人觉得最后一段，你可以再写一点自己的观点与看法，像你支持哪种观点的理由：就拿本题来说，你可以在发挥一下，因为你已经说出了你支持私家车的优点多，持支持的态度，那么你就需再深入点谈谈你为什么持该种观点的理由。
再问： 能帮我后续写一下吗？感激不尽
再答： It does us a lot of good,we can't ignore the fate that private cars have make our daily lift more interesting and exciting.What's more,only we have convinient traffic tool,do we save much time to do something we want to do.However,there are my own opinion on my part.How about you?My dear friends,do you agree on me?
Generally-------Generally speaking 较好
改：
efficiency------efficiently ,work 这是动词,后面要用副词修饰,当然,为了对称,也可以改为：
the efficiency of work
to make matter worse----- to make the matter worse
have------has ,the increase of：增加……的危险,表示……的危险的时候,谓语动词用单数形式
I would like to the people have private cars.-----------I would like the people to have private cars.
would like=want ,适合 want sb to do sth,即是would like sb to do sth
再问： to make matter worse我打错了，是matters，这句话是模板里的一句话。最后一段我还需要再补充些别的吗？总感觉很不充实
再答： to make matters worse 可以 个人觉得最后一段，你可以再写一点自己的观点与看法，像你支持哪种观点的理由：就拿本题来说，你可以在发挥一下，因为你已经说出了你支持私家车的优点多，持支持的态度，那么你就需再深入点谈谈你为什么持该种观点的理由。
再问： 能帮我后续写一下吗？感激不尽
再答： It does us a lot of good,we can't ignore the fate that private cars have make our daily lift more interesting and exciting.What's more,only we have convinient traffic tool,do we save much time to do something we want to do.However,there are my own opinion on my part.How about you?My dear friends,do you agree on me?
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