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英语作文句子~I‘m writing to complain about my air conditioner whic

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英语作文句子~
I‘m writing to complain about my air conditioner which I purchase in your store that it made too much noise when the maching operated 可以这样写么?
将原句里的purchase in 改成purchased from,that改成because,when the machine operated改成when the machine is operating就可以了.
也就是说写成:I'm writing to complain about my air conditioner which I purchased in your store because it made too much noise when the machine is operated.是可以的.
不过句子还是简练一点的好:I write this as a complaint to you regarding the air conditioner I purchased from your store as it makes far too much noise during operation.
天上~