作业帮帮忙看一下下面这段英文有什么语法错误没
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帮忙看一下下面这段英文有什么语法错误没
There are something about the selecao system:
1.Every selecao is supposed to use the 10billion yen in the mobilephone to lead Japan to a right way in whatever manner they wish with the money.
2.There is a supporter ub these selecaos,but others won't know who the supporter is except Mr.Outside.The supporter will kill these who break the rules
3.If a selecao use the money only for self-interest or simply doing nothing with the mobile phone,the supporter will kill him or her.
4.The 10 billion yen in the mobilephone is the electronic money and can't change into the ready money.If a selecao wants to do something,they can call juiz to ask for help.As the price,corresponding money will be deducted.
5.Others can't use the mobilephone because of the fingerprint protect system.If a selecao die,the heir will inheirt the mobilephone and the surplus money.
6.If the money is used up but the selecao hasn't led Japan to a right way,the supporter will kill the selecao.
7.If one selecao succeed in leading Japan to a right way,he or she will be sent to see Mr.Outside and others will be killed.
8.Whether the selecao has led Japan to a right way is up to Mr.Outside.
Selecao意为“代表”
第2点的“ub”是“in”，我打错了
There are something about the selecao system:
1.Every selecao is supposed to use the 10billion yen in the mobilephone to lead Japan to a right way in whatever manner they wish with the money.
2.There is a supporter ub these selecaos,but others won't know who the supporter is except Mr.Outside.The supporter will kill these who break the rules
3.If a selecao use the money only for self-interest or simply doing nothing with the mobile phone,the supporter will kill him or her.
4.The 10 billion yen in the mobilephone is the electronic money and can't change into the ready money.If a selecao wants to do something,they can call juiz to ask for help.As the price,corresponding money will be deducted.
5.Others can't use the mobilephone because of the fingerprint protect system.If a selecao die,the heir will inheirt the mobilephone and the surplus money.
6.If the money is used up but the selecao hasn't led Japan to a right way,the supporter will kill the selecao.
7.If one selecao succeed in leading Japan to a right way,he or she will be sent to see Mr.Outside and others will be killed.
8.Whether the selecao has led Japan to a right way is up to Mr.Outside.
Selecao意为“代表”
第2点的“ub”是“in”，我打错了
开头应该是,there IS sth
第一句,建议句序调整.10 B yne in the mobilephone in whatever manner they wish,to lead Japan to a right way with the money.
把in whatever manner they with with the money放在一起感觉不合适,可能更容易混淆.
第二句,ub 是什么玩意?
第三句,if a selecao use ,use后面加S
第四句electronic money,前面的the 去掉.ready money 前面的the 去掉.
第五句,if a selecao die,die后面加s.inheirt 拼写错误,inherit
还有个别地方觉得有点怪,不过没有语法错误.就算了.
第一句,建议句序调整.10 B yne in the mobilephone in whatever manner they wish,to lead Japan to a right way with the money.
把in whatever manner they with with the money放在一起感觉不合适,可能更容易混淆.
第二句,ub 是什么玩意?
第三句,if a selecao use ,use后面加S
第四句electronic money,前面的the 去掉.ready money 前面的the 去掉.
第五句,if a selecao die,die后面加s.inheirt 拼写错误,inherit
还有个别地方觉得有点怪,不过没有语法错误.就算了.