求英语高手,帮我修改一下这篇英语作文.急.快,就今天

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求英语高手,帮我修改一下这篇英语作文.急.快,就今天
My Summer Holiday
Everyyear,Our summer holiday is in July and August.It’s a long time,and I can domany things during this time.The weather is very hot in the summer holiday,we
must wear T-shirt and shorts.This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school.So I don’t have summer homework.It makes me feel very happy.But I
also enrolled an English
class.In English class,and I get to know some new friends.They and I get along very happy .In my spare time,I always listen
to music and read books,sometimes I ride my bicycle.Oh,My bicycle is very
good.Time passes very quickly,Summer has passed half.I finally have the opportunity to travel.I am
going to visit the Yellow
Mountain tomorrow.I am
going to enjoy the beauty of the Yellow
Mountain.I hope that I
have a pleasant journey.And you?
以上统统为一段话

every year 分开
do many 分开
第二排的holiday后应该是句号,接下来的we大写
T-shirt应该是T-shirts
This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school.应该是
Before this summer holiday,I just graduated from elementary
school.
In English class,and I get to know some new friends
改为In the English class,加上the
还有就是去掉and,
还有就是叙述你在课堂里的事情全部应该是过去时态,你都没有注意,太多动词了,我就不一一改了.

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