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请帮忙改下这段英文的语法错误.

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请帮忙改下这段英文的语法错误.
Since you gave me some secret photos last night,I have been waiting for some more exciting photos.Could you hurry up?I can not wait!
我稍微改了下请参考
这短话没有大的语法错误只是在细节上几个地方稍有不妥
1)出现了两个photos,本着避免用词重复的原则,第二个photot用代词ones代替.
2)通常说hurry it up
Since you gave me some secret photos last night,I have been waiting for some more exciting ones.Could you hurry it up?I can not wait!