英语好的进,An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea1.

英语好的进,
An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
1.between France and Ehgland in the balloon in 1784.High
2.over the water ,they discover a hole in the balloon.The
3.hole became bigger and bigger.The air keeps the
4.balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was
5.coming up.The two men threw all their equipment into
6.the water to make the balloon light.It statted to rise
7.higher again.So it was still too close to the water
8.Finally,the men threw away most of his clothes to
9.save themselves.The crowed waiting for to greet them in
10.England was very suiprised see this when the balloon
landed in front of them
11.I apprecicate your help very well.On the first day of
12.camp,you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After
13.that,you always gave me specially attention and inspired
14.to me to join in acticities.As a result,I gradually got to
15.know the other campers.Because the help you gave me that summer,
16.my life changed.I gained so much conflidence that I go back
17.to school as new person.My grades improved.I became
18.very active but made new friends.Today,I got a letter that
19.said I had been admitting to a college.I am proud of it.I just
20.want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person
以上两篇短文,每篇各有9个错误,有一个是对的．
请各位英语好的美女帅哥帮个忙．
序号后的句子
有错误的按序号哪里错并修改

1.in the balloon --> in a balloon
2.discover -->discovered
3.keeps --> keeping
4.正确
5.up -->down
6.statted -->started
7.So -->But
8.his --> their
9.去掉 to
10.see -->to see
11 apprecicate -> appreciate (拼写错误),very well -> very much
12 myself -> me
13 没有错误
14 to me -> me 去掉to
15 the other -> other
16 changed -> has changed
17 as new person -> as a new person
18 but -> and
19 admitting -> admitted
20 becoming -> to become