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帮忙修改一下英语作文.只要把语法错误和词汇错误纠正出来.
Today I want to talk about something which the Italians like to eat best, that is macaroni. Macaroni is an Italian food and it is also very popular all round the world. The Italians like them as the same way we like rice. In Italy, one single Italian eats 28 kilograms of macaroni every year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of the macaroni. Some believe that the great explorer, Marco polo had taken them from China to Italy. But more experts are sure that Etruscans, who at that time, had once been the residents of Northern Italy, had begun to make macaroni early in the 7th century. For large wooden tables which were surely used to mix flour and cookers that were considered as cooking macaronis were found in the Etruscan ruins. Those are the best evidence to prove the inventors of the macaroni were Italians.
Today, people always cook the macaroni with ketchup, cheese, pepper, mushrooms, etc. These prove the fact that we have made a great many progress in cooking the macaroni. Macaroni also has its large family. Zita, Ennie, Lasagne, Orzo Route, Capellini… Macaroni has reached over 500 kinds and we have already had 2000 ways to cook the food. We will never have the chance to taste most of them. So if you plan to have some macaroni for Today’s dinner, try to cook it in a different way. I wish you can have a good appetite.
如果再提些修改意见就更好了.
Today I want to talk about something which the Italians like to eat best, that is macaroni. Macaroni is an Italian food and it is also very popular all round the world. The Italians like them as the same way we like rice. In Italy, one single Italian eats 28 kilograms of macaroni every year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of the macaroni. Some believe that the great explorer, Marco polo had taken them from China to Italy. But more experts are sure that Etruscans, who at that time, had once been the residents of Northern Italy, had begun to make macaroni early in the 7th century. For large wooden tables which were surely used to mix flour and cookers that were considered as cooking macaronis were found in the Etruscan ruins. Those are the best evidence to prove the inventors of the macaroni were Italians.
Today, people always cook the macaroni with ketchup, cheese, pepper, mushrooms, etc. These prove the fact that we have made a great many progress in cooking the macaroni. Macaroni also has its large family. Zita, Ennie, Lasagne, Orzo Route, Capellini… Macaroni has reached over 500 kinds and we have already had 2000 ways to cook the food. We will never have the chance to taste most of them. So if you plan to have some macaroni for Today’s dinner, try to cook it in a different way. I wish you can have a good appetite.
如果再提些修改意见就更好了.
Today I want to talk about something (which删去或用that,先行词是不定代词,关系代词用that) the Italians like to eat best, that is macaroni. Macaroni is （an删去,food是不可数名词,不可与a连用） Italian food and it is also very popular all round the world. The Italians like it（them 改为it）as much as（the same way删去） we like rice. In Italy, one （single删去） Italian eats 28 kilograms of macaroni every year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of （the 删去）macaroni. Some believe that the great explorer, Marco polo had taken it（them改为it） from China to Italy. But more experts are sure that Etruscans, who at that time, had once been the residents of Northern Italy, had begun to make macaroni early in the 7th century. For large wooden tables which were surely used to mix flour and cookers that were considered as cooking macaronis were found in the Etruscan ruins. Those are the best evidence to prove the inventors of the macaroni were Italians.
Today, people always cook （the删去 ）macaroni with ketchup, cheese, pepper, mushrooms, etc. These prove（ the fact删去） that we have made a great （many删去） progress in cooking （the 删去）macaroni. Macaroni also has its large family. Zita, Ennie, Lasagne, Orzo Route, Capellini… Macaroni has reached over 500 kinds and we have already had 2000 ways to cook the food. We will never have the chance to taste most of them. So if you plan to have some macaroni for Today’s dinner, try to cook it in a different
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Now experts have different ideas about the history of （the 删去）macaroni. Some believe that the great explorer, Marco polo had taken it（them改为it） from China to Italy. But more experts are sure that Etruscans, who at that time, had once been the residents of Northern Italy, had begun to make macaroni early in the 7th century. For large wooden tables which were surely used to mix flour and cookers that were considered as cooking macaronis were found in the Etruscan ruins. Those are the best evidence to prove the inventors of the macaroni were Italians.
Today, people always cook （the删去 ）macaroni with ketchup, cheese, pepper, mushrooms, etc. These prove（ the fact删去） that we have made a great （many删去） progress in cooking （the 删去）macaroni. Macaroni also has its large family. Zita, Ennie, Lasagne, Orzo Route, Capellini… Macaroni has reached over 500 kinds and we have already had 2000 ways to cook the food. We will never have the chance to taste most of them. So if you plan to have some macaroni for Today’s dinner, try to cook it in a different
再问： 关于写作方面，文章有没有什么地方需要润润色的？