作业帮把这篇英语文章的错误找出来
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把这篇英语文章的错误找出来
这是我在今天英语作文竞赛中写的,题目是自我介绍,我是初一的.大家帮我把错误找出来啊!
Hello!Everybody.Do you want to know me?Now Follow me!）
My name is XXX.I’m twelve years old.Now I study atXXX School.I am in Class x,Grade Seven.I have a round face,small eyes,a big nose and a wide mouth.I'm very short and thin.My hobby
is play computer,read books and play football.My favorite color is blue.Rong Zuer is my favorite singer!My favorite movie star is Cheng Long.My character are lively and active.I like English very much.My English teacher is Miss X .She is a good teacher!She is thin.She has a long face and small ears.Her hair is long and her eyes are big.I will study English hard!
Do you want to make friends with me?If you want to make friends with me.Please call me.My telephone number is XXXXXXX.
什么错都找出来,单词错了,没加S,没有大写,语法等等错了都找
My hobby is 什么什么要加ing吗？它又不是动名词，不是说两个动词连在一起才加ing吗？不是除非说I like XXX才加ing的吗？
这是我在今天英语作文竞赛中写的,题目是自我介绍,我是初一的.大家帮我把错误找出来啊!
Hello!Everybody.Do you want to know me?Now Follow me!）
My name is XXX.I’m twelve years old.Now I study atXXX School.I am in Class x,Grade Seven.I have a round face,small eyes,a big nose and a wide mouth.I'm very short and thin.My hobby
is play computer,read books and play football.My favorite color is blue.Rong Zuer is my favorite singer!My favorite movie star is Cheng Long.My character are lively and active.I like English very much.My English teacher is Miss X .She is a good teacher!She is thin.She has a long face and small ears.Her hair is long and her eyes are big.I will study English hard!
Do you want to make friends with me?If you want to make friends with me.Please call me.My telephone number is XXXXXXX.
什么错都找出来,单词错了,没加S,没有大写,语法等等错了都找
My hobby is 什么什么要加ing吗？它又不是动名词，不是说两个动词连在一起才加ing吗？不是除非说I like XXX才加ing的吗？
Hello!Everybody.Do you want to know me?Now Follow （with）me!（最后一句不知道用得对不对?）
My name is XXX.I’m twelve years old.Now I study atXXX School.I am in Class x,Grade Seven.I have a round face,small eyes,a big nose and a wide mouth.I'm very short and thin.My hobby
is (I like) play(ing) computer,read(ing) books and play(ing) football.My favorite color is blue.Rong Zuer is my favorite singer!My favorite movie star is Cheng Long.My character are (I'm)lively and active.I like English very much.My English teacher is Miss X .She is a good teacher!She is thin.She has a long face and small ears.Her hair is long and her eyes are big.I will study English hard!
Do you want to make friends with me?If you want to make friends with me.Please call me.My telephone number is XXXXXXX.
有错误的地方改在括号里了
My name is XXX.I’m twelve years old.Now I study atXXX School.I am in Class x,Grade Seven.I have a round face,small eyes,a big nose and a wide mouth.I'm very short and thin.My hobby
is (I like) play(ing) computer,read(ing) books and play(ing) football.My favorite color is blue.Rong Zuer is my favorite singer!My favorite movie star is Cheng Long.My character are (I'm)lively and active.I like English very much.My English teacher is Miss X .She is a good teacher!She is thin.She has a long face and small ears.Her hair is long and her eyes are big.I will study English hard!
Do you want to make friends with me?If you want to make friends with me.Please call me.My telephone number is XXXXXXX.
有错误的地方改在括号里了