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求英语往年四级作文,自己写的,最好有错误的那种.急用,
Wealth and Happiness
  Everybody wants to get wealth.In today’s material world,making money or becoming wealthy symbolizes a person’s success and capability.Many people just make every effort,pay any price to attain greater wealth.With money,they can but nice,large apartments in nice neighborhood; with money,they can own stately luxury cars.Wealth seems with money,they can own stately luxury cars.Wealth seems to bring all happiness in life.
  In my opinion,people cannot do anything without money,but money is not everything.What money will bring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life.If you are kind enough to help others,especially the poor,money is a good thing to you.With it,you can do much more for the benefit of people and your country,and it will and to your own happiness.If you want money just for your own needs,you’ll never be satisfied or happy.In a word,you should have money spent for more people,only then can money be the source of your happiness.
再问: 自己写的,有题目?
再答: Wealth and Happiness
再问: 自己写的么?有没有一些错误哦,明天我要急用,老师要点评,我英语本来就很差的。。
再答: 你故意找些地方,改错就可以了~~~~~~~