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英语句子改错帮我看下这句话有没问题,Sometimes may lead to threaten or damage t

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英语句子改错
帮我看下这句话有没问题,
Sometimes may lead to threaten or damage the quality of life ,It is impossible to aviod the problem which be created by technology against the technology which can sovles the impending preblem
我想表达的意思是:我们不可能因为技术会威胁或或损害我们的生活质量这一可能性,而不去用它去解决我们即将面临的问题.
首先,第一句话sometimes may lead to ....of life.就是有问题的.这句话没有主语.sometimes it may lead to threaten or damage the quality of life.然后这句话后面要加逗号和but,这样两个句子才不算粘连句(run-ons).
后面那些从句彻底粘在一块儿.....(恕我直言,不好意思)
it is impossible for us not to use science and technology to solve the problems that we're about to face.