英语日记自己每天写一篇,很短的日记,大家帮我看看有哪里是可以提高的.It's turned out cold today
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英语日记
自己每天写一篇,很短的日记,大家帮我看看有哪里是可以提高的.
It's turned out cold today.I wake up at 7:30 am and then when I get to comtele company,we share work experiences and learn from each other.soon we began my job again,I introduce production of telecom company to every passenger on the bus.during the time,I experience not only bitter but also sweet,because you will experience acception and rejection.I will not give up,I hope that some day I can own happiness.
自己每天写一篇,很短的日记,大家帮我看看有哪里是可以提高的.
It's turned out cold today.I wake up at 7:30 am and then when I get to comtele company,we share work experiences and learn from each other.soon we began my job again,I introduce production of telecom company to every passenger on the bus.during the time,I experience not only bitter but also sweet,because you will experience acception and rejection.I will not give up,I hope that some day I can own happiness.
the weather turned cold.
i always wake up at 7 am and then i go to the company 【comtele 应该拼写错了】
work experience 经验不可数
soon we began my job again.【这句很不好.】after that we begin our job
I introduce production of telecom company to every passenger on the bus【products】 【the telecom company】 【in the bus】
during the time,I experience not only bitter but also sweet,because you will experience acception and rejection【很不好.】
——while i introduced the products ,i felt happy and i smiled sweetly,because i could learn a lot.
I hope that some day I can own happiness.【这句话不好.中文很生硬的翻译】
【总体感觉】
单词拼写错误
时态乱用
人称混乱
复杂句子的结构错误
还有很生硬的翻译
【以后可以写短的句子,尝试套用一些结构.最好整篇都是一个时态,人称统一.】
我的语气比较严肃,很抱歉.
再问: 没事,我需要的就是你这样的...
再答: 真不好意思。 回答的时候我心情不好。 其实,写作文很简单。 把思路理好,然后,用简单的句子,加几个句型就好。 晚安。坚持会很好。多看点高考或者四级的范文。
再问: 恩
i always wake up at 7 am and then i go to the company 【comtele 应该拼写错了】
work experience 经验不可数
soon we began my job again.【这句很不好.】after that we begin our job
I introduce production of telecom company to every passenger on the bus【products】 【the telecom company】 【in the bus】
during the time,I experience not only bitter but also sweet,because you will experience acception and rejection【很不好.】
——while i introduced the products ,i felt happy and i smiled sweetly,because i could learn a lot.
I hope that some day I can own happiness.【这句话不好.中文很生硬的翻译】
【总体感觉】
单词拼写错误
时态乱用
人称混乱
复杂句子的结构错误
还有很生硬的翻译
【以后可以写短的句子,尝试套用一些结构.最好整篇都是一个时态,人称统一.】
我的语气比较严肃,很抱歉.
再问: 没事,我需要的就是你这样的...
再答: 真不好意思。 回答的时候我心情不好。 其实,写作文很简单。 把思路理好,然后,用简单的句子,加几个句型就好。 晚安。坚持会很好。多看点高考或者四级的范文。
再问: 恩
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