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I am writing the mail in the name of the Student's Union to

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I am writing the mail in the name of the Student's Union to welcome to you international students.I give you some suggestions about your campus life.firstly,the campus is a great place where we should learn a lot of knowledge.secondly,you should make friends,loving learning very much.last,you should go to read the useful books,if you want to be a good student.有什么语法错误吗?
I am writing the mail in the name of the Student's Union to welcome you, the international student. 我以学生会名义写这信欢迎你,这位国际学生.(去掉to, 加逗号,把国际学生改成同位语).
about our campus life. (把你们改我们,因为“我”在写信,介绍我们的校园生活).
The campus is a great place,firstly where (1,2,3 叙述 校园是great place)
we could learn ( 用could 或 can.should 有“理应”的意思,语气太强烈)
you could make friends, who love learning very much.
you could read many useful books.
(假如你想成为 .不如改成祝愿:)
Wish you become a good student.
(或删去最后这句)
再问: 真详细,多谢啦!