作业帮帮忙看看我写的一篇英语作文,看看有没有什么错误?
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帮忙看看我写的一篇英语作文,看看有没有什么错误?
Water is very important to everyone.Nobody can live without water.
But nowadays,some people still not realize the importance of water.Last week ,I saw a people wasting water in the restroom.I was very angry and I warn her not to do this next time.When you see someone not protecting water,you should prevent him.We shoud save water.And we mustn’t pollute water.Don’t throw litter into river.Water is the source of life.
We can do a lot to protect water.Let’s take action!I believe we can do it!
有没有语法错误?提提修改意见
Water is very important to everyone.Nobody can live without water.
But nowadays,some people still not realize the importance of water.Last week ,I saw a people wasting water in the restroom.I was very angry and I warn her not to do this next time.When you see someone not protecting water,you should prevent him.We shoud save water.And we mustn’t pollute water.Don’t throw litter into river.Water is the source of life.
We can do a lot to protect water.Let’s take action!I believe we can do it!
有没有语法错误?提提修改意见
先看看语法~
Last week ,I saw a people wasting water in the restroom.
people是复数,person才是单数.
→Last week ,I saw a person wasting water in the restroom.
I was very angry and I warn her not to do this next time.
你前面用了过去式,可是忘了后面的哦~
→I was very angry and I warned her not to do this next time.
Don’t throw litter into river.
river前面没有冠词,或者加复数也行
→Don’t throw litter into rivers.
从文章上来说~
We shoud save water.And we mustn’t pollute water.Don’t throw litter into river.Water is the source of life.
We can do a lot to protect water.Let’s take action!I believe we can do it!
这段你没有觉得怪怪的么……怎么也应该是先说We can do a lot to protect water,才举可以怎样做的例子吧~而且例子的内容也有点单薄了恩~结尾再有深度一点~
那个~逻辑关系最好在紧密一点,因果关系什么的再强烈一点.
比如说多用点连接词,像什么as a result of,for example,from my perspective,as far as i am concerned,之类的恩~
顺便说一下,写作文的话,用一些从句会更能丰富你想表达的意思……
单词什么的最好在多样化一点~不能说要表达污染的意思就光用pollute吧~还有contaminate、taint之类的恩~
加油加油~要把学过的东西用起来才行~
Last week ,I saw a people wasting water in the restroom.
people是复数,person才是单数.
→Last week ,I saw a person wasting water in the restroom.
I was very angry and I warn her not to do this next time.
你前面用了过去式,可是忘了后面的哦~
→I was very angry and I warned her not to do this next time.
Don’t throw litter into river.
river前面没有冠词,或者加复数也行
→Don’t throw litter into rivers.
从文章上来说~
We shoud save water.And we mustn’t pollute water.Don’t throw litter into river.Water is the source of life.
We can do a lot to protect water.Let’s take action!I believe we can do it!
这段你没有觉得怪怪的么……怎么也应该是先说We can do a lot to protect water,才举可以怎样做的例子吧~而且例子的内容也有点单薄了恩~结尾再有深度一点~
那个~逻辑关系最好在紧密一点,因果关系什么的再强烈一点.
比如说多用点连接词,像什么as a result of,for example,from my perspective,as far as i am concerned,之类的恩~
顺便说一下,写作文的话,用一些从句会更能丰富你想表达的意思……
单词什么的最好在多样化一点~不能说要表达污染的意思就光用pollute吧~还有contaminate、taint之类的恩~
加油加油~要把学过的东西用起来才行~
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