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I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary. In school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to one's health, and will make one live longer. So, I like sports very much. I go running at five o'clock in the morning, and after classes in the afternoon. I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy. At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist when I grow up. In order to attain these goalsI go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy.
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I have many hobbies,such as sports,singing,playing the violin and keeping a diary.
In school,I often hear the P.E .teacher say,sports is good for one's health,and it make one live longer.So I like sports very much.I run at five o'clock in the morning and after classes in the afternoon.I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy.
At home .I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist when I grow up.In order to attain the goals , I often go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday,and practise singing and playing the violin every day.The busier I am, the happier I am.
同学：你写的很好，有的地方给你作了修改，你看还行吗？如有异议，请继续讨论。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I have many hobbies,such as sports,singing,playing the violin and keeping a diary.
In school,I often hear the P.E .teacher say,sports is good for one's health,and it make one live longer.So I like sports very much.I run at five o'clock in the morning and after classes in the afternoon.I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy.
At home .I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist when I grow up.In order to attain the goals , I often go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday,and practise singing and playing the violin every day.The busier I am, the happier I am.
同学：你写的很好，有的地方给你作了修改，你看还行吗？如有异议，请继续讨论。
最终答案：略