英语作文：假如你新交了一个笔友,请你用书信告他你的一切,如爱好,家庭,生活习惯等等.

英语作文：假如你新交了一个笔友,请你用书信告他你的一切,如爱好,家庭,生活习惯等等.
你们谁来回答,如果回答了,就把悬赏提高.

dear xxx,
I'm xxx,your new pal friend.Since this is the first time I write to you and you don't know much about me,I will tell you something about me.I love music,like all the teens do.Rock music is my facourite.Music of Michale Jackson is another classic hit which I won't miss.what's your favourite kind of music?
I also like to read when I am free.I don't read literatures from authors like shakespear as they are too dull for me.I usually read magenize as you can learn a lot of things about today's world.When I'm bored,I will read fiction such as harry porter and twilight.
Now I shall tell you somthing about my family.I am the only child of my parents,beacuse of your know,the one child policy which China holds.But I have a cousin who is 3 years older than me.I bet she can be a good math teacher because she explains all the things I don't understand in math.By the way,my father is a chemistry teacher in a high school and my mother is a physics teacher in the same school.They fell in love with each other when they were teaching the same graduating class.
Oops,I have writen a lot already and it is 10 pm now.I forget to tell you that I usually go to bed at 10 pm and wake up at 6 am.How about you?Ok I think I really have to stop here and go to sleep because my mom has just come over to let me stop writing.I'm looking forward for your mail and good night.
your sincerely
xx