帮我修改一篇英语作文根据漫画编一篇故事.帮我找出错误,改得更好.last Sunday is my birthday.I
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帮我修改一篇英语作文
根据漫画编一篇故事.帮我找出错误,改得更好.
last Sunday is my birthday.I gathered my friends and classmates to my bonfire party .I played the violin for them.Everybody in the place said :”Your music is very beautiful."Then burst into warm applause.
After the party I carried my violin and bag went home .On the way home I saw a girl faint on the grass who was bitten by the snake.at the moment .I got into a total panic .I tried to let me calm .Then I used my knowledge to aid her .For a moment ,she turned to awake,she was very grateful to me.
Because she was injured ,I sent her to home safely his family was grateful to me .And I am happy too.
how happy a birthday it is.
根据漫画编一篇故事.帮我找出错误,改得更好.
last Sunday is my birthday.I gathered my friends and classmates to my bonfire party .I played the violin for them.Everybody in the place said :”Your music is very beautiful."Then burst into warm applause.
After the party I carried my violin and bag went home .On the way home I saw a girl faint on the grass who was bitten by the snake.at the moment .I got into a total panic .I tried to let me calm .Then I used my knowledge to aid her .For a moment ,she turned to awake,she was very grateful to me.
Because she was injured ,I sent her to home safely his family was grateful to me .And I am happy too.
how happy a birthday it is.
第一个is 改为 was因为已经提到last Sunday说明事情发生在过去,故要用过去时态
and bag后边再加一个and
the snake->a snake因为这条蛇作者不知道是哪条,所以用不定冠词a 而不用the
let me calm->把me改为myself因为是让自己冷静下来,所以用反身代词myself
turned to awake->这里把to 云掉
I sent her to home->把to去掉
最后的it is处的is 改为was,因为生日已经过去了,所以要用过去时态
and bag后边再加一个and
the snake->a snake因为这条蛇作者不知道是哪条,所以用不定冠词a 而不用the
let me calm->把me改为myself因为是让自己冷静下来,所以用反身代词myself
turned to awake->这里把to 云掉
I sent her to home->把to去掉
最后的it is处的is 改为was,因为生日已经过去了,所以要用过去时态
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