有什么语法错误之类的 My mom can be seen as wind in this point; she blo

有什么语法错误之类的
My mom can be seen as wind in this point; she blows first time by letting me go to Venezuela.But later she blows the second time.When I get all set in Venezuela,I got used to the new school,and I learnt Spanish and I have lots of friends.Even I earned the diploma for my hard study.My mom told me,she had to go back Beijing for some reason.I could clearly remember,I got shock when I heard that news.As myself,I am a person that likes to move,because I don’t like always adopt new environment.And this time was different than the first time,because first time was I chose to leave with my mom.However,this time I had no choice,I had to leave again.I cried,I hate to part with my friends.But I couldn’t do anything,they were useless.What I could was wipe the tears away,pack my bags and go with my mom.When I came to Beijing,I lived with my cousins,therefore I went to a same school as my cousin did,which was an international school,though I didn’t know any English at that time.I thought although I couldn’t keep my study at Venezuela,but I still need work hard at new school and high achievement award,that was my goal,even though I didn’t know how to speak English.When I went to BCIS,I found to adopt a new environment was not that scary,everyone was friendly,and soon I had friends.After one year of staying at international school,I could start speak English.To start off of speak English was not easy,but once you start speak it,you will found that is not difficult.I get used to that school again,and I started join swimming team,basketball team and also participate in the drama play.Sometime I even sigh with emotion that if I didn’t come to that school,I won’t have lots of fun as I have now.If I didn’t come to this school,then I won’t speak English and play basketball as good as now.I appreciate that my mom brought me back.
From my own experience,it proves that Chinese idiom that the thing you think is bad will turn to a good result,but it needs to base on not give up and work hard.If I don’t work hard,then I will learn not so many thing,I will feel regret someday.So that wind closed a door,but didn’t blow another open.The key is about and depend on you.When only you are work hard,you can get chance and be the best.In that time no wind can blows you close.

不仅是语法问题,表达也有问题.有些地方难理解,尽量结合原文改动.
My mom could be said like a wind in this aspect.The first time she blowed me to Venezuela.And then,she blowed the second time.When I got to Venezuela,I got into a new school.I learned spanish and I had lots of friends.Even I got a diploma by my hard working.My mum told me,she had to go back Beijing for somereasons.I could remember clearly,what a shock when I heard that news.I am a person who like movement.Because I dont like change a new enviroment frequently.But this time was different than the times before.Last time I chosed to leave my mum,but I have no choice this time.I had to leave again.
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