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点评下这篇作文!
有什么错误请一一列举~有写得好的地方也请列出~
What I am going to do next term
In next term ,I’m going to study harder.I think Grade 8 is the most important grade because in Grade 7 ,we just went in the gate of our school ,and it was a linkup between the primary school and the middle school which only imparts us some easier knowledge relatively.And in Grade 9,we’ll mainly have a general revision.Therefore,Grade 8 is the key of studying hard in the 3 years of the junior middle school.In the former term,I was always very careless.Almost all the mistakes in (every each) English test were made by my carelessness.In next term,I should increase my degree of carefulness so that my result won’t be always dissatisfied.Actually,my English level isn’t very low,but what I showed to my classmates isn’t the real level of my own.As the saying goes,”seeing is believing”,from now on,I’ll study harder and strive my result for still greater achievements!
谢谢各位的细心点评和夸奖~
8过我觉得缺点和错误不止这么多吧~应该还有的~
有什么错误请一一列举~有写得好的地方也请列出~
What I am going to do next term
In next term ,I’m going to study harder.I think Grade 8 is the most important grade because in Grade 7 ,we just went in the gate of our school ,and it was a linkup between the primary school and the middle school which only imparts us some easier knowledge relatively.And in Grade 9,we’ll mainly have a general revision.Therefore,Grade 8 is the key of studying hard in the 3 years of the junior middle school.In the former term,I was always very careless.Almost all the mistakes in (every each) English test were made by my carelessness.In next term,I should increase my degree of carefulness so that my result won’t be always dissatisfied.Actually,my English level isn’t very low,but what I showed to my classmates isn’t the real level of my own.As the saying goes,”seeing is believing”,from now on,I’ll study harder and strive my result for still greater achievements!
谢谢各位的细心点评和夸奖~
8过我觉得缺点和错误不止这么多吧~应该还有的~
也不完全是楼上说的CHINGLISH
写的还算好,对于8年级的学生来说
不过,文章里面多应该用一些指代的词,别一个主语用来用去的,最明显的就是那个grade8和grade9,反复出现很讨厌的.
文章中间缺少一些关联和转折性的词语,要注意单词的拼写和时态的变化.
至于优点还是有的,我就不一一点评了...
写的还算好,对于8年级的学生来说
不过,文章里面多应该用一些指代的词,别一个主语用来用去的,最明显的就是那个grade8和grade9,反复出现很讨厌的.
文章中间缺少一些关联和转折性的词语,要注意单词的拼写和时态的变化.
至于优点还是有的,我就不一一点评了...
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