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英语作文、、请老师改一下

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自己写的英语作文、、不好的地方请老师改一下吧 Do you like going to the movies? You know that "we will be lost youth"? Do you like to watch? I very much like to see, it was written by Zhao Wei, tells the story of youth young and frivolous, the reality of the helplessness and desolation, the youth will eventually breaks up, time will fly, so to take advantage of the time now
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Do you like going to the movies? Do you know that fiml we will be lost youth? Do you like to watch it? I like to see it very much. It was written by Zhao Wei. It tells the story of teenagers, the reality of the helplessness and desolation。The youth will eventually breaks up, time will fly, so we should take advantage of time now . 这位同学,你的作文立意是好的,但有些地方语言生硬,语言不够地道。以后多给自己练习的机会。
最终答案:略