作业帮求高手改一篇英语短文第一排：Jone liked fast food very much.His parent were
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求高手改一篇英语短文
第一排：Jone liked fast food very much.His parent were so第二排：busy that they had few time to cook food for him at home.第三排：So they often took him eat fast food .That's why John 第四排：because overweight.My mother has always told his parents 五：that too much fast food was harmful ,and they ignored六：my mother's advice .Recent,the doctor warned him七：never not to eat fast food any more after the poor boy had a八：physical examination.His parents came to realize that a九：terrbly mistake they had made.Now Johe's mother often 第十排：comes to ask my mother for advice in how make healthy food.（每排有一个错误或者正确的,如果有时间解说一下就更好,
第一排：Jone liked fast food very much.His parent were so第二排：busy that they had few time to cook food for him at home.第三排：So they often took him eat fast food .That's why John 第四排：because overweight.My mother has always told his parents 五：that too much fast food was harmful ,and they ignored六：my mother's advice .Recent,the doctor warned him七：never not to eat fast food any more after the poor boy had a八：physical examination.His parents came to realize that a九：terrbly mistake they had made.Now Johe's mother often 第十排：comes to ask my mother for advice in how make healthy food.（每排有一个错误或者正确的,如果有时间解说一下就更好,
第二排：few 改为little,因为time是不可数名词；第三排：him 后加to,因为是take sb to sp or do sth
第四排because 改为was;五：and 改为but,是转折关系；六,是Recently,做状语；七,去掉never 或not中的一个；八,that 改为what;九,用形容词terrible来修饰名词mistake;十,advice on sth,in改为on
第四排because 改为was;五：and 改为but,是转折关系；六,是Recently,做状语；七,去掉never 或not中的一个；八,that 改为what;九,用形容词terrible来修饰名词mistake;十,advice on sth,in改为on
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