作业帮我有一篇短文改错题想请教大家.烦请高人给出正确答案并说明原因.
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我有一篇短文改错题想请教大家.烦请高人给出正确答案并说明原因.
Before he was a teacher,Bob told me what he 1____
would like to be a lwyer when he was at school.2____
He had worked very hard at his lessons and tried 3____
enter into a famous university,but some thing unhappy 4____
happened in his family,that made it necessary for him to 5____
working for a living.As a young man,he had been a 6____
bus-driver,a dustman and a salesman,but he spends his 7____
spare time studying and finally became college teacher.8____
"Young people," he often said,"full of wishes 9____
and hope after they step into the society." 10____
Before he was a teacher,Bob told me what he 1____
would like to be a lwyer when he was at school.2____
He had worked very hard at his lessons and tried 3____
enter into a famous university,but some thing unhappy 4____
happened in his family,that made it necessary for him to 5____
working for a living.As a young man,he had been a 6____
bus-driver,a dustman and a salesman,but he spends his 7____
spare time studying and finally became college teacher.8____
"Young people," he often said,"full of wishes 9____
and hope after they step into the society." 10____
保证准确率!
1. what改成that
2. 无错（lawyer是打错单词吧）
3. tried后面加上to
4. 去掉into 或 enter改成go
5. that改成which
6. working改成work
7. spends改成spent
8. became和college中间加入a
9. full前面加上are
10. after改成before
再问： 可以帮忙说明这样改的原因不？ 可以追加分值, 万分感谢! 牛人团长，好想加你为QQ好友，随时请教!
再答： 不好意思，百度Hi罢工了，没看见您的追问。 1. told me后面的宾语从句不缺少任何成分，所以用that引导； 2. 无错 3. tiy to do sth 尽力/努力做某事 4. enter一般视为及物动词，后面直接加宾语即可；go是不及物动词，后面可加介宾短语 5. that不能引导非限制性定语从句，which可以且指代的是整个主句 6. it's necessary for sb to do sth，即to后面是动词原形 7. 前后时态必须对应，此句应该用一般过去时 8. become后面的名词表语不能省略冠词；become a college teacher 成为一名大学教师 9. 此句无动词做谓语：young people (are) full of wishes 10. 句意推断：年轻人有很多愿望肯定是在步入社会前，而不是在步入社会之后 QQ是用来交友的，Hi是用来答题的，呵呵。
1. what改成that
2. 无错（lawyer是打错单词吧）
3. tried后面加上to
4. 去掉into 或 enter改成go
5. that改成which
6. working改成work
7. spends改成spent
8. became和college中间加入a
9. full前面加上are
10. after改成before
再问： 可以帮忙说明这样改的原因不？ 可以追加分值, 万分感谢! 牛人团长，好想加你为QQ好友，随时请教!
再答： 不好意思，百度Hi罢工了，没看见您的追问。 1. told me后面的宾语从句不缺少任何成分，所以用that引导； 2. 无错 3. tiy to do sth 尽力/努力做某事 4. enter一般视为及物动词，后面直接加宾语即可；go是不及物动词，后面可加介宾短语 5. that不能引导非限制性定语从句，which可以且指代的是整个主句 6. it's necessary for sb to do sth，即to后面是动词原形 7. 前后时态必须对应，此句应该用一般过去时 8. become后面的名词表语不能省略冠词；become a college teacher 成为一名大学教师 9. 此句无动词做谓语：young people (are) full of wishes 10. 句意推断：年轻人有很多愿望肯定是在步入社会前，而不是在步入社会之后 QQ是用来交友的，Hi是用来答题的，呵呵。