我的英语作文,帮我提提意见
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我的英语作文,帮我提提意见
Regenerate in debris
Recently we have watched an amazing movie named Fighting Club.I had not heard about this movie before until a ratio program introduced it coincidently.I thought it was a fate for me with this film.After I finished watching this movie,I was shocked immensely.The theme of this film is about the attitude toward the mankind’s lives.
For many years,we have been indoctrinated to follow the social rules,do as it always goes.If we let time of our lives go without even fight or doubt with the difference,which is the way we treat everything happened around us,we will be slaved by the society.It means we already been derived the liberties which belongs to us since we were born.The only method to get rid of this chain which has forced us is to make gigantic doom.Regenerating in debris will make us a difference and make the whole world a better place.The content above was the thought of Tyler who is the demon side of Jack.
Appearance of Tyler was caused by the torpid life in a big city.Jack used to have a stable life.However,he was not satisfied with the present life but to make something provocative.For this sake,the demon side appeared unconsciously.At the beginning,Jack was not aware of the potential menace of the peculiars they had done.As time went way,he suddenly got a feel that the fighting club should be shut down.There he started his redemption.Of the pity,the other side was too strong for him to suppress.Suicide was the only way to clear devil out of his mind was the idea in his mind at the moment of extremely desperate.He put his trigger and finally realized the true beauty of the real world.Just like the theme which was defined by director,ruin is the paradise for rebirth.
The utmost destination for this film is to make us to cherish everything in the real world.We have to be careful to avoid being misled by this movie with the idea of being the terminator of the world.
Regenerate in debris
Recently we have watched an amazing movie named Fighting Club.I had not heard about this movie before until a ratio program introduced it coincidently.I thought it was a fate for me with this film.After I finished watching this movie,I was shocked immensely.The theme of this film is about the attitude toward the mankind’s lives.
For many years,we have been indoctrinated to follow the social rules,do as it always goes.If we let time of our lives go without even fight or doubt with the difference,which is the way we treat everything happened around us,we will be slaved by the society.It means we already been derived the liberties which belongs to us since we were born.The only method to get rid of this chain which has forced us is to make gigantic doom.Regenerating in debris will make us a difference and make the whole world a better place.The content above was the thought of Tyler who is the demon side of Jack.
Appearance of Tyler was caused by the torpid life in a big city.Jack used to have a stable life.However,he was not satisfied with the present life but to make something provocative.For this sake,the demon side appeared unconsciously.At the beginning,Jack was not aware of the potential menace of the peculiars they had done.As time went way,he suddenly got a feel that the fighting club should be shut down.There he started his redemption.Of the pity,the other side was too strong for him to suppress.Suicide was the only way to clear devil out of his mind was the idea in his mind at the moment of extremely desperate.He put his trigger and finally realized the true beauty of the real world.Just like the theme which was defined by director,ruin is the paradise for rebirth.
The utmost destination for this film is to make us to cherish everything in the real world.We have to be careful to avoid being misled by this movie with the idea of being the terminator of the world.
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