高中英语修改Fast FoodFast food is very popular in China.Children a

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高中英语修改
Fast Food
Fast food is very popular in China.Children and teenagers are crazy about eatting them.
The reasons why so many people like eatting fast food are as follows:In the first place ,it is a waste of time for us to eat fast food.It convinces of the busy ,too.Secondly,we can not only eat fast food in the restaurant but also at home.The surroundings
in the restaurant is clean and comfortable.We enjoy eatting food in it.Finally,the quantily of the fast food is good.But it is not very good for us to grow up healthily.It has little nurture inside.
Don't eat fast food every meal.Please don't lrt children eat too much fast food,too.
帮忙看看哪里要改,满分30,能打几分

1.fast food 是不可数名词
2.surround是副词不能加ing
3.It convinces of the busy ,too.这句话有问题,convince是及物动词,后面不加of,用法不对.
4.quantily质量拼错了,是quality
5.Finally,the quantily of the fast food is good.But it is not very good for us to grow up healthily.既然说了品质好,怎么会对身体有害呢?应该改为Finally,the quality of the fast food is not very good and it is bad for our health.
6.最后一句的too去掉.
总的来说,作文语法错误很多,最多18.
不好意思,严格了点.

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