写一篇 英语小段文 200分,高出分.

写一篇 英语小段文 200分,高出分.
看3c,写小段文（并翻译）
就是用第一人称 写写以前，（性格，爱好 学习，高矮，兴趣......等），再写写现在。
用上used to .....now........就好了，200分 有那麽难吗？
记着翻译！

三楼 机器翻译的东西还能看么?语法错误一堆!你这是误人子弟懂么?我宁愿花20分钟帮Lz写一篇范文,也不会干这种更缺德的事
至少我的范文能规范Lz的写作的句式和用词,让LZ还能学到点英语知识,你的翻译机除了能让Lz交差之外,还有作用么?
首先需要说明一点的是
我不知道Lz的英语水平是怎样,但我猜,对一个普通的初中生而言,我写的这篇范文可能生词比较多,所以Lz如果不认识的单词比较多,请查字典弄懂,再对照我的译文仔细研究下
至少不能让你的英语老师问你时 你自己单词看不懂穿帮
In terms of my primary school life,I'd like to describe that it really impress me constantly,and I believe I will remember this precious schooling time during my life.
It is evident that I have changed a lot as time goes by,especially when I come to the primary school,first and most foremost,I have recognised the responsibility which I have to carry out,not only in the studying,but also in the every aspects of my life.secondly,I also make some friends and get well on with them,which makes me feel relaxed and no pressure when I hang out with them.
By contrast,I still remembered that when I was a young kid before entering the primary school,I didn't care about others,no mention to know made teamwork with my peers and helped with each other.
All in all,I have to appreciate my primay school life,It teaches me a lot of things,and I will do my best to be an excellent student during this schooling life.
附翻译
说起我的中学生活,我想说它持续影响着我,并且我觉得我会在我的有生之年一直记住这段宝贵的求学生涯
很明显,随着时间的流逝,我改变了很多,特别是当我进入中学之后.首先最重要的一点,我认识到我需要肩负的责任不仅仅是学习,还有生活的各个方面吧,第二点,我交了几个知心好友并且和他们相处的很好,这让我和他们一起玩的时候觉得很放松,没有压力.
相对而言,我依然记得当我还是一个没有上中学的小屁孩时,我不会关心别人,更别提我还懂得团队合作或者互相帮助我的小伙伴.
总之,我必须感谢我的中学生活,它教会了我很多事情,我将会尽我最大的努力做我所在初中的一名优秀的学生
有些词组和句型 实在不懂再hi我