作业帮各位英语达人能不能帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮忙修改后提交.
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各位英语达人能不能帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮忙修改后提交.
hello,everyone!Very glad to take part in the game.(My mother is happy all day for this matter)Let me introduce myself!My name's Win.I’m a student in a very beautiful school called Guangming High School and I am in Grade 8.As you see,I'm a girl.And I'm 14.When i'm a student in Grade 6,I tried to enter this game.But i was eliminated.What a pity!Tody,i try my best again,i hope i can go further.emm..i love singing(although i may sing bad) i can play guitar.but i can't play very well.i'm very lively and optimistic.And i love to laugh.i hope you will support me!thanks a lot .
会显得过于笼统吗?
hello,everyone!Very glad to take part in the game.(My mother is happy all day for this matter)Let me introduce myself!My name's Win.I’m a student in a very beautiful school called Guangming High School and I am in Grade 8.As you see,I'm a girl.And I'm 14.When i'm a student in Grade 6,I tried to enter this game.But i was eliminated.What a pity!Tody,i try my best again,i hope i can go further.emm..i love singing(although i may sing bad) i can play guitar.but i can't play very well.i'm very lively and optimistic.And i love to laugh.i hope you will support me!thanks a lot .
会显得过于笼统吗?
I'm very glad.,this matter中matter用的不恰当,应该是saying badly,play the guitar,play the 加乐器名,总体来说还可以但有点中式英语的味道
再问： 那可以帮我把"中式英语"修改一下吗? 谢谢了!!!!!!!!! 还有,有点不明白你的意思...
再答： 在你这个年龄这样写已经可以了，中式英语就是纯粹将汉语翻译成英文，按照说汉语的习惯说英语，有点太生硬，但这也是很多学生的通病，我也犯过，加强阅读加强写作就会提高
再问： 那可以帮我把"中式英语"修改一下吗? 谢谢了!!!!!!!!! 还有,有点不明白你的意思...
再答： 在你这个年龄这样写已经可以了，中式英语就是纯粹将汉语翻译成英文，按照说汉语的习惯说英语，有点太生硬，但这也是很多学生的通病，我也犯过，加强阅读加强写作就会提高