作业帮【高悬赏】帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿有什么问题
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【高悬赏】帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿有什么问题
Life is one of the most important things.It’s very fragile and precious.
But in recent years,some people killed oneself.Do you want to kill yourself?Don’t think about it.
If you die,the world is also continued,but you have gone with the wind.
Look at this man:His name is Joe.His arms and legs is cripple,he just can use his nose to draw pictures,although it’s very difficult,but Joe is happy,even happier than the other healthy people!Why?Why can he strongly to exist?
So,cherish life.
生命是最重要的东西之一.它非常脆弱和宝贵.
但近年来,许多人自杀.你想自杀吗?想都不要想.
如果你死了,世界仍然会继续,但你却不复存在.
看看这个人：他叫Joe.他的手臂和腿都残废了,只能用他的鼻子画画,虽然这样很困难,但他却很快乐,甚至比其他健康的人更快乐!
为什么?为什么他能坚强地活着?
所以,珍惜生命.
有语法错误吗?
有用词不当吗?
有何其他不足?
Life is one of the most important things.It’s very fragile and precious.
But in recent years,some people killed oneself.Do you want to kill yourself?Don’t think about it.
If you die,the world is also continued,but you have gone with the wind.
Look at this man:His name is Joe.His arms and legs is cripple,he just can use his nose to draw pictures,although it’s very difficult,but Joe is happy,even happier than the other healthy people!Why?Why can he strongly to exist?
So,cherish life.
生命是最重要的东西之一.它非常脆弱和宝贵.
但近年来,许多人自杀.你想自杀吗?想都不要想.
如果你死了,世界仍然会继续,但你却不复存在.
看看这个人：他叫Joe.他的手臂和腿都残废了,只能用他的鼻子画画,虽然这样很困难,但他却很快乐,甚至比其他健康的人更快乐!
为什么?为什么他能坚强地活着?
所以,珍惜生命.
有语法错误吗?
有用词不当吗?
有何其他不足?
some people killed oneself.数不对,用法也不好
His arms and legs is cripple,数不对
His arms and legs is cripple,he just can use his nose to draw pictures,although it’s very difficult,but Joe is happy,even happier than the other healthy people!断句有问题
Why can he strongly to exist?语法不对
总的来说这篇文章很chinglish.作者的思维是中文式的.改了就不是作者自己的了.
His arms and legs is cripple,数不对
His arms and legs is cripple,he just can use his nose to draw pictures,although it’s very difficult,but Joe is happy,even happier than the other healthy people!断句有问题
Why can he strongly to exist?语法不对
总的来说这篇文章很chinglish.作者的思维是中文式的.改了就不是作者自己的了.