作业帮求改初中英语作文,关于低碳的
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求改初中英语作文,关于低碳的
Better low carbon better life
How to make our life better?Low carbon,the hot activitr,can make our word more wonderful to live in.Of couse ,my classmates say turn off the lightswhen you didn’t use them.And in some classmates eyes,we can use paper both sides to encourage low cardon because the less paper we use,the more trees we’ll save.In fact,the most classmates think the best way is to ride bikes when we go to school.Not only can we save money ,but we can do sport at the same time.What’s more,in my eyes we can plant trees as much as we can.Becouse the air is so bad that we need to plant enough trees to clean it.
Believe it or not,if everyone makes a contribution to encouraging himself to live a low carbon life the low cardon,our life become better.
Better low carbon better life
How to make our life better?Low carbon,the hot activitr,can make our word more wonderful to live in.Of couse ,my classmates say turn off the lightswhen you didn’t use them.And in some classmates eyes,we can use paper both sides to encourage low cardon because the less paper we use,the more trees we’ll save.In fact,the most classmates think the best way is to ride bikes when we go to school.Not only can we save money ,but we can do sport at the same time.What’s more,in my eyes we can plant trees as much as we can.Becouse the air is so bad that we need to plant enough trees to clean it.
Believe it or not,if everyone makes a contribution to encouraging himself to live a low carbon life the low cardon,our life become better.
activity,our world,be lived in ,classmates' eyes,most of my classmates,ride bike.but also can we practise,Because,"the low cardon,our life become better"这句话不合理,去掉,整体水平有待提高.