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修改英语文章有高手的帮我改下我写的英语文章,in this article i will description my

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有高手的帮我改下我写的英语文章,
in this article i will description my family.so first is my father,he is a reliable man with strong sense of responsibilety.he is a little heavy and middle height.short hair.he has an cool nose.he,s interpersonal is very good.i think it's because of he's rightup and frank character.but he had a bad temper,very easy to loose temper.but some times,it let him more dignity.
then i will introduce my mother.a considerate mother.she's tall and slim with big eyes.she has long and straight hair.althouqh she is a litte lazy,she is often like a ayoung.always want to try new tings.taste new flavour.and she can keep optimistic all the time,she has a great diversity of hobbies,and sports is her favorite hobby.
ok,it was late,i will end here,i hope anybody can give me some valuable suggestion.thanks.
I'd like to describe my family.Firstly,I want to introduce my father,who has a strong sense of responsibility.He is not tall and a little overweight.He has short hair and a cool nose.He has a good relationship with others just for his good character.However,his temper is bad and he ofen lose temple easily,which sometimes let him
embarrassed.
My considerate mother is tall and slim,who has big eyes and long,straight hair.She has many hobbies,sports is her favorite and she is interested in many things,so she always wants to try new things and taste new flavour.She is optimistic all the time
I love my families very much.
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