作业帮请帮我,改一下这篇短文改错,文章如下谢谢
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请帮我,改一下这篇短文改错,文章如下谢谢
As a woman in England during World War ,I was pushing my baby brother in the park on the morning when I met a American soldier .His eyes were on the baby carriage,no on me .he asked politely if he can push the baby across the park since there were many people around,I fell it was safe to allow him .The soldier watched the child close with a smile in his face as he went on silently.At an otherside of the park,he stopped "I just got a good news that I'm a father,"he said ."And I want to see how it felt.Thank you very much."
As a woman in England during World War ,I was pushing my baby brother in the park on the morning when I met a American soldier .His eyes were on the baby carriage,no on me .he asked politely if he can push the baby across the park since there were many people around,I fell it was safe to allow him .The soldier watched the child close with a smile in his face as he went on silently.At an otherside of the park,he stopped "I just got a good news that I'm a father,"he said ."And I want to see how it felt.Thank you very much."
As a woman in England during World War ,I was pushing my baby brother in the park on（in） the morning when I met a American soldier .His eyes were on the baby carriage,no (not) on me .he asked politely if he can (could) push the baby across the park since there were many people around,I fell (felt) it was safe to allow him .The soldier watched the child close (closely)with a smile in (on) his face as he went on silently.At an (the)otherside of the park,he stopped "I just got a good news that I'm a father,"he said ."And I want to see how it felt(feels).Thank you very much."
再问： 不用改成an American soldier 吗
再答： 是的，抱歉没注意到 应该是（ an American）
再问： 不用改成an American soldier 吗
再答： 是的，抱歉没注意到 应该是（ an American）