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自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.谢谢了~~

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自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.谢谢了~~
many years ago, I had refused a boy who courted me so many times . nowadays we always go to bar to play with eachother , I fell I am falling in love with him. But he told me he has girlfriend now.
Many years ago,I refused a boy who had been courting me for quite a while.Recently we always hang out together.I feel I'm in love with him,but he told me he had a girlfriend
多年前,我拒绝了一个追求我很久的男孩(拒绝是个短暂性动作,不需要用过去完成时.而追求很久可以用连贯性动作had been courting)
现在我们经常一块出去玩(nowadays太过于书面,可改为recently.而hang out就包含了去酒吧)
我感觉我爱上他了,但他说他已经名草有主.后面的跟你的差不多,稍微简洁了一点
再问: 你把我的最后一句has还成了had..我觉得应该用has吧。。不是引用某人说的话应该是原型吗?
再答: he told me "I have a girlfriend" 这个是引用,打上冒号。他告诉我“我有女友了”
he told me he had a girlfriend 这个是陈述,从句时态跟随主句时态。