麻烦老师解答：短文改错 Growi

麻烦老师解答：短文改错 Growi

短文改错     Growing up is not easy.Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.     For many years,she was Mum.My mother was a career woman and has her own problems to take care,but when I needed her,she was always there.Her strength came from anywhere.I don't quite know,somewhere very deep.She was so strong that she would never break down,even while I went to her with all my littleboy problems and shout at her.     Her strength made me stronger and gave to me courage to try things other thought were impossible. A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up. ____________________________________________________________________________

Growing up is not easy.Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.
                                                              1.needed
For many years, she it was Mum.My mother was a career woman and has  her
                         2.it                                                                        3.had
own problems to take care∧,but when I needed her,she was always  there.Her
                                        4.of
strength came from anywhere .I don't quite know,somewhere very deep.
                            5.somewhere
She was so strong that she would never break down,even while (though/if) I
                                                                                       6.when
went to her with all my littleboy problems and shout at her.
                                                                7.shouted
Her strength made me stronger and gave to me courage to try things   other others
                                                        8.  去掉                                  9.others
thought were impossible.A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.
                                                                        10.strong