英语翻译A long time ago,the world's only God.God stand the lonel

英语翻译
A long time ago,the world's only God.God stand the loneliness,has created a new biological -----
people.God told the people to obey his orders,not defiance,to build temples,often dedicated to them,
were agreed.God satisfied sleeping.
In Atlantis,there was a king who ruled the entire continent.The king enjoyed all the good things
human,but always not satisfied.One day,he suddenly thought:"If I could go to a place where God lives
lived enough." Future thinking too,desire to tolerate,he thought,he has numerous military,even if
God should be afraid of.Greed overcame fear,he combined all the kingdoms,to lure them with sweet
talk.So they formed a coalition against God.Wanton destruction of their temples,all religious people,
all killed,all the way burning and looting,hit the holy resting place ---- the gods.
Around the cloud layer around the sacred mountain,from time to time have heard the voices of
birds,the environment is so peaceful and beautiful.King went to the throne of God,to do the above,
proud to say:"I am the world's most powerful god."
God is very angry,he used lightning,storm,flood attack force.Not long afterwards,the king and
his army would perish together,and the civilians also suffered God's anger.After the prince had heard,
it is angry,he was rushed to Sacred menacing.The foot of the sacred mountain,he saw his father's
body,he cried and said to his father,I will avenge you!He just about to go into one of his father's
body light beam,and then to a two-edged sword of.He picked up the sword,rushed to the Holy Mountain.
Of course,this can not escape God's discernment.God suddenly appeared in front of him,face him with a
scowl of said:"The man was wanted everything to kill his master it?Being the case,I will let humans
have it." Then he waved his staves,rushed up the ghost of numerous human,human suddenly became hell.
He went away satisfied,but forget he is still alive.Prince immediately took up the sword,pierce the
heart of God.God is dead.And therefore the other gods disappear suddenly become holy ground.
No one knows the Prince gone,people only know that God does not exist.Others said they had seen
God in the sky.Many years later,people will forget the existence of God.When disaster strikes,there
is always a mysterious man,carrying a sword,to a mysterious place,he their path,no longer a
disaster.

A long time ago, the world's only God.
(Long long ago,there was only God in this world).
God stand the loneliness, has created a new biological ----- people
(God cannot stand with the loneliness,so he created a new creature---human being).
God told the people to obey his orders, not defiance, to build temples, often dedicated to them, were agreed. God satisfied sleeping.
(God told human beings to obey his orders and not to betray him.He also told people to build temples to dedicate him,and people agreed).
In Atlantis, there was a king who ruled the entire continent.
The king enjoyed all the good things human, but always not satisfied.
(The king had experienced all the good things, but he was not satisfied).
One day, he suddenly thought: "If I could go to a place where God lives lived enough."
(One day, he suddenly thought:"If I could live in the place where God stays, my life would be perfect.").
Future thinking too, desire to tolerate, he thought, he has numerous military, even if God should be afraid of.
(This thought stayed in his mind all the time and he could not help thinking of it.He thought,"I have such large number of militaries that even God is scared .")
Greed overcame fear, he combined all the kingdoms, to lure them with sweet talk.
(Finally,greed overcame fear.He combined all the kingdoms and attracted them with extravagating promises).
So they formed a coalition against God. Wanton destruction of their temples, all religious people, all killed, all the way burning and looting, hit the holy resting place ---- the gods.
(So they formed a union against God.They destroyed all the temples and killed all the religious people.They burned and robed all the way to the Holy Mountain where God lives).
Around the cloud layer around the sacred mountain, from time to time have heard the voices of birds, the environment is so peaceful and beautiful.
(There was cloud around the Holy Mountain,and birds sang from time to time.The enviroment was so peaceful and beautiful.)
King went to the throne of God, to do the above, proud to say: "I am the world's most powerful god."
(The king went to the throne of God,sat on it and said proudly:"I am the most powerful God in this world."
God is very angry, he used lightning, storm, flood attack force.
(God is so angry that he used lighting,storm and flood to attack the forces).
Not long afterwards, the king and his army would perish together, and the civilians also suffered God's anger.
(Not long afterwards,the king perished with his army,and the civilians also suffered God's anger.)
After the prince had heard, it is angry, he was rushed to Sacred menacing.
(After the prince had heard the tragedy,he was angry and rushed to the Holy Mountain.)
The foot of the sacred mountain, he saw his father's body, he cried and said to his father, I will avenge you!
(At the foot of the Holy Mountain,he saw his father's body .He cried and said to his father:"I'll revenge you!")
He just about to go into one of his father's body light beam, and then to a two-edged sword of.
(He was about to leaving when his father's body became a beam of light column and then a sword.)
He picked up the sword, and rushed to the Holy Mountain.
Of course, this can not escape God's discernment. God suddenly appeared in front of him, face him with a scowl of said: "The man was wanted everything to kill his master it? Being the case, I will let humans have it."
(……in front of him,facing him angrily and said:"Would human kill his master if he earns everything he wants?If so,I would rather have them disappeared.)
Then he waved his staves, rushed up the ghost of numerous human, human suddenly became hell.
(Then he waved his staves,and innumerable ghosts rushed to the heaven,and the heaven became the hell.)
He went away satisfied, but forget he is still alive.
(He left satisfying,but forgot that the prince was still alive).
Prince immediately took up the sword, pierce the heart of God. God is dead.
And therefore the other gods disappear suddenly become holy ground.
(……gods disappeared and the Mountain suddenly became the ground.)
No one knows the Prince gone, people only know that God does not exist.
(No one knows where had the Prince gone,and what they know only is that God will never appear again.)
Others said they had seen God in the sky.
Many years later, people will forget the existence of God.
(……poeple forget the existence of God.)
When disaster strikes, there is always a mysterious man, carrying a sword, to a mysterious place, he their path, no longer a disaster.
(When disaster strikes,there is always a mysterious man carrying a mystrious sword to a mysterious place.Disater no longer appears in the place where he pass through.)
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