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假设你是李华，寄宿在英国人Mrs Wilson家，今天Mrs Wilson不在家，而你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson写一张留言条，要求内容如下： 1、外出购物； 2、替房东还书； 3、Tracy来电话留言：①、咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee)的见面取消；②、此事已告知Susan；③请尽快回电。 （要求：词数不少于90词，并可以适当增加细节，是行文连贯） Mrs Wilson, I'm going out shopping,and won't be back until about 6:30 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I o'clock this afternoon,Tracy called ,saying that she couldn't meet at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.And she said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change. See you soon! Li Hua
解题思路： 写的很好
解题过程：
Mrs Wilson, I'm going out shopping and won't be back until about 6:30 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I o'clock this afternoon Tracy called ,saying that she couldn't meet at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to（去掉，attend为及物动词）.And she said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. See you soon! Li Hua
写的很好，一般在作状语的时间状语和主句之家不需加逗号，结构合理，语言清楚，是一片很好的作文 同学：不知这样的解答你能否满意，如有不同意见，请在下面的继续讨论中留言好吗？拾贝老师愿意与你再次进行亲切的交流。匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。祝：学习不断进步，开心每一天！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Mrs Wilson, I'm going out shopping and won't be back until about 6:30 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I o'clock this afternoon Tracy called ,saying that she couldn't meet at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to（去掉，attend为及物动词）.And she said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. See you soon! Li Hua
写的很好，一般在作状语的时间状语和主句之家不需加逗号，结构合理，语言清楚，是一片很好的作文 同学：不知这样的解答你能否满意，如有不同意见，请在下面的继续讨论中留言好吗？拾贝老师愿意与你再次进行亲切的交流。匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。祝：学习不断进步，开心每一天！
最终答案：略