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帮忙纠错英文翻译~帮我看看哪里翻错了?括号里的是一定要用到的~1.超市已出现,许多杂货店就破产了~(soon after

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帮忙纠错英文翻译~
帮我看看哪里翻错了?括号里的是一定要用到的~
1.超市已出现,许多杂货店就破产了~(soon after)
more grocery store burst-up soon after the supermarket appeared.
2.珍妮25岁时开始当教师~(at the age of)
At the age of 25,Jane began to be a teacher.
3.最终他成功的解决了这个难题.(be successful in)
he was successful in this difficult problem in the end.
4.我们认为这次演讲比赛很成功~(think of...as)
we were think of this speech competition as more successful.
5.他的研究对我国科学发展做出了贡献~(make a contribution to)
his research made a contribution to the develop of the science in our country.
1 more改成many,store要加复数,另外burst up之间没有连字符吧. (楼上提出的supermarket应该可以不用改,因为the加可数名词单数能表示一类事物,可商榷)
2 began to be是什么意思? became就可以了,语法不错,但是很awkward.
3 be successful in后面要接动名词,可加solving.
4 be think? be动词后面怎么能再跟实义动词呢?也没有必要用过去时,去掉were.另外,as是介词,后面得跟宾语,形容词不能做宾语的,而且也没有“比较、更”的意思,不用比较级,more successful改成a success吧.
5 to也是介词,同上,develop是动词,不能加the,也不可以做宾语,不能跟在to后面,所以develop要改成development.而且后面这半句很awkward,建议把the develop of the science in our country改成the scientific development of our country.