帮忙看看这两段话那个合适点,不合适的地方帮忙修改下~

帮忙看看这两段话那个合适点,不合适的地方帮忙修改下~
This research is of great use to us in English communication,to which we have attached importance for several years.This article gives so me examples of blunders in cross-cultural communication involved in daily conversations,as well as tries to bring up some solutions to deal with them.What we need to know include cultural background,in different time,places and social environment,and also individual habits that influence heavily on our transmitting process of message and further on whether we would communication successfully.
二、The research of this topic is great useful to English communication.Comunication is becoming more and more important in recent years.This article is an attempt to reveal the blunders in cross cultural communication through the analysis of six key components and five procedures which are involved in daily conversation and tries to find out solutions to deal with them.
We need to know Cultural background,time,place and social environment,and individual problems that heavily affect our encoding and decoding,sending and receiving,as well as the transmitting process of message,influences speaking and listening,and how to help us communicate successfully in English .
汉语意思是,本标题的研究对于如何用英语进行交际非常有用.在近几年沟通已经被重视.本文试图揭示在跨文化交际失误,试图寻找解决方案,以对付他们.
我们需要知道的文化背景、时间、地点、社会环境和个人问题严重影响到我们的编码和解码,发送和接收,以及消息.传输过程中影响英语口语和听力训练,以及如何帮助我们成功的沟通在英语的世界里.

二.你的错误不多,但要注意present tense,present continuous tense 的用法,还有of,the 是如何使用的.
The research of this topic is great useful for English communication.Communication becomes more and more important in recent years.This article is an attempt to reveal the blunders of the cross cultural communication through the analysis of six key components and five procedures which are involved in daily conversation and tries to find out solutions to deal with them.
We need to know the cultural background,time,place and social environment and individual problems that heavily affect our encoding and decoding,sending and receiving,as well as the transmitting process of message,influences of speaking and listening to help us communicate successfully in English.
再次补充,useful后面通常只加,to/for,Useful to someone(人物）,Useful for something(某个方面或物体或动作）