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短文改错 十个错误In the moring of April29,2008,hundreds of millions

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短文改错 十个错误
In the moring of April29,2008,hundreds of millions of middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports progarm.Eleven thousands students and I in our city took a active part of this porgram .The porgram was holding to call on students to have daily exercise in the hope we will have good health to study and enjoy ourselves.I think that it is a good idea for us students to have daily exercise.Although we were spend an hour a day on exercise,it is very worth it .Taking exercise every day help us build our bodies and keep a clear mind.In this way we can feel energetic and study more efficient.
因为我在考虑hope后是否加that 和and I 怎么改的问题,但我觉得还是在students 前加other这个该法更不错,
In the moring of---On the morning of(具体某一天用on)
thousands---thousand(前面有具体的数字时,thousand不加s)
and I--including me(我包括在这一万一千个学生当中.用了and就不包括在其中了.)
a active part--an active part(active是元音开头)
holding---held(被动)
hope---hope that (we will have good health to study and enjoy ourselves是hope的同位主从句,that不可省)
have good health--be healthy
were spend--spent (主动)
help---helps(非谓语动词作主语,谓语要用第三人称单数形式)
efficient--efficiently (这是副词,修饰动词study)
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