作业帮求大神看看这篇初一英语作文有木有语法问题
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求大神看看这篇初一英语作文有木有语法问题
Dear Tom,
Oh,you have a nice home,but my home also very beautiful .Let me tell you something about my new home.
My home is not very large.But I love it a lot.There is a beautiful garden behind my house.There are many flowers in the center of the garden.Three trees at the back of the garden.There are three apple trees.Look!Some birds in the tree.
My bedroom next to the study.My study is wonderful.There is a desk,a chair,a shelf,a sofa and so on.What's on the shelf?There are some books and some pens.I like reading books a lot.
The living room is very large.My parents bedroom next to the living room .The kitchen near the dining room.Where is the bathroom?It's next to my study.
I love my home a lot.
Dear Tom,
Oh,you have a nice home,but my home also very beautiful .Let me tell you something about my new home.
My home is not very large.But I love it a lot.There is a beautiful garden behind my house.There are many flowers in the center of the garden.Three trees at the back of the garden.There are three apple trees.Look!Some birds in the tree.
My bedroom next to the study.My study is wonderful.There is a desk,a chair,a shelf,a sofa and so on.What's on the shelf?There are some books and some pens.I like reading books a lot.
The living room is very large.My parents bedroom next to the living room .The kitchen near the dining room.Where is the bathroom?It's next to my study.
I love my home a lot.
出现了一些小问题,为你更正如下：
Dear Tom,
Oh,you have a nice house,but my house is also very beautiful .Let me tell you something about my new house.
My house is not very large.But I love it a lot.There is a beautiful garden behind my house.There are many flowers in the center of the garden.Three trees are at the back of the garden.There are three apple trees.Look!Some birds are standing on the branch of trees .
My bedroom is next to my study.The study is wonderful.There is a desk,a chair,a shelf,a sofa and so on.And what's on the shelf?There are some books and some pens.I like reading books a lot.
The living room is very large.My parents' bedroom is next to the living room .The kitchen is near the dining room.Where is the bathroom?Well,It's next to my study.
sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear Tom,
Oh,you have a nice house,but my house is also very beautiful .Let me tell you something about my new house.
My house is not very large.But I love it a lot.There is a beautiful garden behind my house.There are many flowers in the center of the garden.Three trees are at the back of the garden.There are three apple trees.Look!Some birds are standing on the branch of trees .
My bedroom is next to my study.The study is wonderful.There is a desk,a chair,a shelf,a sofa and so on.And what's on the shelf?There are some books and some pens.I like reading books a lot.
The living room is very large.My parents' bedroom is next to the living room .The kitchen is near the dining room.Where is the bathroom?Well,It's next to my study.
sincerely yours,
Li Ming