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英语改错10处agree that Hong Kong is the attractive place for tour

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英语改错10处
agree that Hong Kong is the attractive place for tourists . I will give reasons why I think it so. First of allHong Kong is a good place for shops and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants this small city. MoreoverHong Kong has a lot of attractions who provide tourists with memorable experience. The two famous theme parksOcean Park or Disneylandattract thousands of tourists from around the world. Hong Kong is an international citybut tourists must also enjoy Chinese tradition culture. In conclusionHong Kong was a very good choice for tourists
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