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帮忙改下英语作文,急Ladies and gentlemenI am Xinhua Middle School stud

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帮忙改下英语作文,急
Ladies and gentlemen
I am Xinhua Middle School students.Now the street has a lot of rubbish,such as plastic garbage.Garbage seriously pollute our living environment,to our cause some troubles.
In my opinion,we should not be subjected to the garbage from the trouble,we should construct an environmentally friendly society.First of all,we can not throw garbage.Secondly,for can again use waste recycling,for can no longer use garbage incineration or landfill.At the same time,the government should publish corresponding policy to solve the rubbish problem.
Here I call on everyone,see garbage please take the initiative to pick up and throw into the garbage,to protect our living environment,cherish nature.The natural
environment is the basis of our existence.In order to environment better contribute an own strength,let us work together,let us not subject to garbage problem,let us refuel together,protect the environment,to solve the rubbish problem.
把里面的语法错误,时态错误,不连贯的地方改的连贯些 急
I am a student of Xinhua Middle School.Now,there are a lot of rubbish on street,such as plastic bags,cans,bottle and so forth.Garbage can seriously contaminate our living environment as well as causes troubles to the society.
In my opinion,we should not be subjected to the garbage from the trouble,we should construct an environmentally-friendly society.First of all,we should not dispose garbage in an inappropriate way.Secondly,we can use waste recycling method,for we are no longer in use of garbage incineration or landfill.At the same time,the government should establish corresponding rules to refrain people's degree of freedom from damaging our environment.
Here I call on everyone,when seeing garbage please take the initiative to pick them up and throw them into the dumpster for the sake of protecting our living environment and harmony nature.The natural environment is the basis of our existence.In order to improve the environment,let us work together and dedicated to protect the ecosystem,let us not subject to garbage problem,let us refuel together,protect the environment,to solve the rubbish problem.
middle school写的不错了
再问: let us not subject to garbage problem。这句要改的话 该如何改= =老师给我画了横线 不会改
再答: 你想说神马意思